Your Resume Introduction: Make a Powerful First Impression with Doug Perry
Your resume introduction is your first—and sometimes only—opportunity to capture an employer’s attention. It’s where their eyes go first, where your name and contact information sit, and most importantly, where you introduce yourself as the ideal candidate. Many people make the mistake of using this space ineffectively. Let’s change that.
Ditch the “Objective” Statement
If your resume still has “Objective” as the heading of your introduction, it’s time for an update. Employers already know your goal is to land a great job. Instead, opt for “Summary” or “About Me”—something that feels modern, personal, and engaging. Think of yourself as a brand. What’s your promise to an employer? Your introduction should showcase what drives you, what makes you unique, and what they can expect if they hire you.
Keep It Short, Keep Them Curious
Less is more. Your introduction should spark interest—not overload with details. Aim for 30-50 words (2-3 sentences) that give just enough insight to make them want to read more. Use confident, personality-driven language that makes your statement stand out. Employers are looking for candidates who bring something special to the table—this is your chance to show them why you’re the one.
How to Craft the Perfect Introduction
A great “About Me” statement is simple yet powerful. Use this structure:
Sentence 1: Highlight the kind of professional you are and your passion for your work.
Sentence 2: Showcase your value as a team member or why you’re seeking a new opportunity.
Example 1: Traditional Introduction- “As a skilled and personable dental hygienist, I take pride in creating a welcoming experience and helping patients feel confident in their smiles. I thrive in a collaborative team that values both professionalism and fun, ensuring exceptional patient care every day.”
Example 2: Story-Driven Approach- “I became a dental hygienist because I loved how my own visits made me feel—leaving with a healthy, bright smile. Now, I share that same passion with my patients, working alongside a team dedicated to outstanding oral care.”
Your resume introduction is your first impression—make it count. Use this space wisely, and you’ll stand out before they even glance at the rest of your resume.
Doug Perry is an expert resume writer and job search coach. He and his wife, Tracie, who is a dental hygienist, created GetHiredRDH in response to the challenging dental hygiene job market and have helped thousands of dental hygienists through tips and individual services. This includes basic job searches and strategically transitioning into different fields (within dentistry and outside). If you need individual help, click here to contact Doug.